Shark Attacks
Most people are afraid of being attacked by sharks. However it is very unlikely to get attacked by sharks. It is more likely to get struck by lightening or get drowned in the water. If you are still worried about shark attacks, you can travel in groups or stay out when you have a cut.
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Bear Attacks
[Actual]
In the Yellowstone National Park in the US, statistics show that you are more likely to drown than to be attacked by a bear. In the period between 1839 and 1994, 101 people died from drowning but only 5 people were killed by grizzly bears.
[Paraphrased]
In the Yellowstone National Park in US, it is said that people are more likely to drown rather than getting killed by bears. During the time in 1839 and 1994, 101 people died from drowning but only 5 got killed by grizzly bears.
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